Very disjointed for sure; not sure why the people behind the play are OK with Harry messing up the opening or even why the audience knows who he is, not to mention the women in the play randomly just fall for Harry at some point. And then there’s also the suddenly thrown in ending with Harry’s girlfriend(?) suddenly announcing he saved her father’s job. I have to admit, that last part actually did get a pretty good laugh out of me; the sheer randomness of it made it funny. It felt like it was parodying those kinds of plots you often see in movies where the main character has to save a theater or something along those lines, but it’s usually kind of in the background while other story elements take precedence. It surprisingly kind of works in that context, even though I’m pretty sure that wasn’t the intention. It’s just a bad editing job.
This sounds like it should be a recipe for disaster, but this short is actually really funny. I love the opening where Harry is pretending to do the doorbell effects and the actress in the scene gets angry at how unprofessional she considers his imitations. The speakeasy scene is one of those great moments where Harry gets to just mess around with a small set; it’s bizarre, but Harry has that ability to carry a scene like this, even when it basically just amounts to him deciding between drinks. The actual theater part is, again, odd for how disjointed it is, but the obvious overacting from the stage actors gets a laugh from me and Harry gets some fun moments trying to keep everything all together; he literally just drags the leading man’s body on to the stage and doesn’t seem to care that the audience can clearly see him doing that. For some reason, that got a larger laugh out of me than I was expecting. The audience aspect is odd at times, but I do like how they make fun of the villain when he has to repeat his lines.
A very odd short, but knowing it was cut down helps give a better understanding and even in this bizarre, cut down form, a really funny film actually shines through. I enjoyed it and think it’s kind of a shame we probably won’t ever be able to see it in its full form.